Hi Tamaiti, well done for getting your work posted in time. I agree with you that you need to work on changing the sound of your voice. One part you should work on in your speech is the sentences that says 'if you are fit they will have'. Can you see a mistake in this sentence? keep learning your speech and developing confidence with saying your speech.
Hi there, my name is Ben and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you explained what Rugby League is. It made me think of what Rugby League is like when you are on the field. Have you thought about changing your question marks to full stops? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsbenl.blogspot.co.nz/.
Hi Tamaiti, well done for getting your work posted in time. I agree with you that you need to work on changing the sound of your voice.
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Hi there, my name is Ben and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you explained what Rugby League is. It made me think of what Rugby League is like when you are on the field. Have you thought about changing your question marks to full stops? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsbenl.blogspot.co.nz/.
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