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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, May 2, 2019

Riding My Motorbike

Riding my motorbike.

Rahina 29 Ō Paenga Whāwhā


On a foggy sunday morning I could barely see my nextdoor neighbours house.“Wow its misty as” I said to my brother Hanita. My brother Hanita said to me, “Yeah man shhh can you hear that “ my brother said to me. Ohh and guess who it is, its my uncle Pat on my motorbike. So my dad got up he said to me and my brothers “Come on let's go and get this motorbike and your brother A-J’s one”. Firstly my brothers A-J, Hanita, dad and myself went to my uncle to get mine and my brother A-J’s motorbike.


After that when we got up to my uncle house he said to me, “Here boy start it up and go for a ride” so I went for a ride down my uncle’s driveway. When I got back up to my uncle’s house he said, “well now you can take it home now” and my uncle also said, “here boy I have some guards for you to take home for you”. So I went back down to my house and my cousin Mataroria was riding his yamaha 450 and I was riding my honda xr 100 and my brother A-J just got his new CR 85 2 stroke. Later on my brother Hanita and my dad went to town to dump the rubbish and get some riding gas.


Later on when my dad and brother got back from town I went for another ride on my motorbike and I was going fast as down the paddock I chopped down into second and my motorbike ringed out and the front tire started slipping and I fell off my motorbike. My dad said to me, “get up boy start it up and keep on going”. So I kept on riding my motorbike back to my house.

So after riding for a few hours I went for a shower and watched spider verse and that's all I done on the holidays.   

Thursday, October 25, 2018

e-asTTle Writing Sample

This is my results for my writing assessment.
I reckon I did alright. I wrote more than I was expecting too. Next year (as this is our last assessment for the year) I will try my best to improve cause I love learning. Anyway, catchya later.

Friday, March 2, 2018

How to be a Bucket Filler


WALT write an explanation text.
Success Criteria: I will-
  • Have a title, introduction, description, process and conclusion.
  • Use appropriate language features - cause and effect, time words, present tense
  • Use topic specific vocabulary
  • Self-assess myself to see what level I think I am writing at.


How to be a Bucket Filler.

What is a bucket filler. Everyone in the whole wide world carries an invisible bucket every day.  When you are a bucket filler you give praise, positive comments, support to other people.  By doing this you fill their bucket up.
How would you be a bucket filler?
One way is you can be a bucket filler by showing love and even just giving them a smile and even a little grin or being friendly to them. Do not pick on anyone and don’t be a bucket dipper. If you are one then you are a bully.  Bullies are bad people because they look for a fight. But if you be a good friend then they will be good to you.

Another way to respect someone is by sticking up for them and always helping them if they are always getting bullied. If someone is bullying you just go and tell the teacher.

Lastly by being supportive and showing manaakitanga is by being a great person. How could you be supportive and show friendship. You can show that by supporting your friends. Just by saying to them if you are winning the game just tell them “keep going and you will win”.


In summary, Bucket filling is important because it helps people feel good about themselves.  When you fill someone’s bucket with good stuff you will find that you feel good too. So….be a bucket filler!

My self-assessment:
punctuation
Ideas
Structure and language
Organisation
Sentence Structure
Vocabulary
Spelling
Total
5
4
4
5
4
4
6
32=4p
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Friday, November 3, 2017

sports are great.


This is my writing assessment. I have tried to independently improve my sentence. I am looking to check that they make sense. I am checking my punctuation.

I think I am good at is understanding simple and compound sentence. I still need to learn complex.



My opinion is that is sports important to you. Is sports important to me or is music important than sport. Do you agree that sports are important then music or you disagree that music is important then sport. I agree that sports is important than music because music you just sit on you bum all day. Sports keep you active and it keeps you fit and healthy. Do you want to be sitting down and being a blobfish all day. No I would go out there being fit and healthy and building up your friendship.


My first reason is Do you want to sit on your bumm all day or get out there and do sport? What do you want to do? Because I would want to go out there and get lot’s of friends and be fit. I wouldn’t like to be unfit and unhealthy I want to be fit and healthy. Like Shaun Johnson, Kevin Locke, Billy Slater, Roger Tuivasa-Sheck, Joshua addo-carr, Greg inglis, Jordan Rapana, Mose Mbye, Danny levi, James tedesco, Ben barba, Kodi nikorima, Cooper cronk, Anthony milford, Benji marshall.

My second reason is do you want to be a star rugby player because I would I would like to be like a healthy rugby player would you like to be a famous rugby player I would I would play for the Hurricanes and the Crusaders the Highlander and poison I would like to be in is first five or half back number 10 or 9.

My third reason is if you really love so much well you should grow up and be like Beauden Barrett, Lima sopoaga and richie mo'unga because I would them there are one of the top first fives they are so famous I always watch them on youtube because that's my dream is to grow up and be like them there and one more person Reiko ioanei.

In summary now that's my goal is to be a star player and be like Beauden Barrett, Lima Sopoaga , Richie Mo'unga, Rieko ioane, Shaun Johnson, Kevin Locke, Billy Slater, Roger Tuivasa-Sheck well that’s one of my goals and that should be one of your’s to.    

Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Playing rugby league live 3 with my brother.

WALT improve our writing by carefully checking our sentences and trying to add descriptive language. I think I am a bit successful.
I did not use that much descriptive words.  I will need to work on it more next time.



Playing rugby league live 3 with my brother.

On a nice sunny morning me I was up with my dad and my dad said you're up with the bird’s” my dad was poring he was watching a pouring movie and the was Mahana. So I went over the shed side and played my game rugby-league live 3 I made my own team it was so fun my brother Mana woke up and he said after you.” and I said yup you’re gonna have to wait a long time because I'm making a team he replied where right here let me make my own team yup I will just get the rest of my team. Later on I was finish and my brother Mana. My team was called the MEAN HEARTY WARRIORS and my brother Manas team name was the GANGSTERS. His team looked better then mine.


Shortly after the game was done it was a Golden point. I almost got a try with David Klemmer but I got tackled from Tyrone Pechey. My team player Nathan Friend pass the ball to Shaun Johnson and I done a drop goal my team won. And I was so so goddamn happy and the score was 6 to 7 my team won. It went on day kai time boyz my dad yelled out yup coming dad I replied.” So I said yup that's us mana lets go for a kai. For kai it was eggs on toast and porridge. That was yummy thank you for the kai dad. I felt like I wanted a shower so when I went for a shower it was on hot as it felt nice and fresh like kaiwi lakes. After that I got dried and dressed I felt a bit tired so I went in my room and went to sleep. It was so fun with my brother and when I vs him I would never forget that day with my brother.


Next time I will use more descriptive language words in to my work.

Thursday, June 15, 2017

Who wants learn about one of the Kiwi dog.

               Maggie the Kiwi dog.

Book review by Mason and Tamaiti-pani.



I read a book called Maggie the kiwi dog with my group. The author is Sue Gibbison. This book is a Article.


This article is about a dog that saves kiwis from getting killed from the logges. This article takes place in Waitangi New Zealand. The dog Maggie has been working to find kiwis for over nine years. Steve and Maggie works for department of conservation.


This is what i learnt about this article this week. This dog is a huntaway dog it has a really strong-eye sight and good, a very good smell so if you have a dog like this dog your dogs very intelligent.





Wednesday, June 14, 2017

Getting Muddy.



WALT use variety of sentences types simple, compound, complex (Level 4 adverb beginning)




Bang! Bang! My mum was  Banging on the door of my room. “Get up, get up. It’s morning” Mum yelled.  So I woke up and opened my door for my mum. Last weekend my two brothers and I played in the mud at my house.

Then I went to go wash my face in the bathroom. After that my mum told me to go get a warm jacket and pants on. Later on I went for breakfast I had Weetabix. Shortly after It started to rain. A few minutes later it stopped raining so I went to go wake my two brothers up to go play with the golf sticks with me. outside. When my two brothers got up I said to them I feel a bit hot so I took my pants off and had my shorts on and went out the door and raced them to the creek.

My dog Tahae chased after me and jump on my back and I said get off my dog jump off me. When my brothers came by me I said to them Why did you make Tahae chase after me! They were laughing at me. When me and my two brothers got back home it started raining again me and my brothers played long ball. Later on my uncle turn up on his red holden. Shortly after my uncle left to go see my uncle Bun he is so so sick.

A few minutes the grass was so so muddy me and my brothers and I played tag I ankle taped A-J it was so funny me and my brother Hanita were laughing at A-J he pushed me over and I got up and we started playing tackles He tackled me so so hard on the ground my dog was barking at him so my dog Tahae jump on him and he said get off me Tahae get. After that I went for a shower and when I got out of the shower I went over to the shed to play the game and the game was Rugby-League Live 3. I was the Warriors VS Cowboys. I won the score was Twenty Four to me and there score was Ten.


It started getting dark so I went over the house side and ask my mum if I could sleep over the shed side she said yup. So I went back on the shed side to play the game the time was late as later then my mum said so I went to bed. I could not go to sleep so I just keep playing the game antell I was sleepy. So I had my last game with the Warriors VS Eels. Then I went to bed I was so so sleepy so I went to sleep good night.

Thursday, March 30, 2017

What do you do with your rubbish.

Rubbish.  


I am learning how to make my long and short sentence make sense.


I think all waste should not be burnt or go to the landfill. No! I do not want it to be burnt or go to the landfill, what do you reckon? Do you agree or disagree? You do not need to take your rubbish to the dump. I think that you can still take your rubbish to the dump. But you can take some rubbish to the dump like stuff you can’t reuse.
I think people should reuse wood just in case something breaks that has wood. I think you can recycle parts of cars, paper, milk carton, glass, cans and tins. I think organic waste should be taken to the pigs, worm farms and compost. T I think hazardous is poisonous for the plants and bad for the environment. Did you know that biodegradable means stuff can rot down easily. To sum up I think people do not need to take all of their rubbish to the dump because you can make stuff with it.