WALT use write cause and effect sentences.

To be successful we will:

1. Think about an cause (event) and what happens because of it (effect)
2. Use cause and effect connectives such as because of this, as a result, as a consequence and when this happens…
3. Check that full stops are at the end of the idea (remember it will be simple, compound or complex)

One of the good things is that electronic can be recycled. In my class we dismantled some of some broken computers. For example we are helping the environment. Another example is that we can reuse the plastic and the metal off the computers. Another example is when we take our computers to the dump they are just going to the palua people and they are just taking it down with hammers and burn it.

I think I was not successful because I did not have a Cause and a Effect sentence.
My next step is to focus on success criteria.