Let's make a protected beach.

                                     

WALT use language features of persuasive writing

To be successful I will:

Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

Sometimes it was easy and sometimes it was hard. I found hard that trying finding the information in the text about marine reserves. What I found easy was going throw my work and looking for the emotive words. And emotive words are words to make your reads sad or happy.    

Marine reserves

I believe that marine reserves are a good idea and we should have more. Do you know what a Marine reserves is. It is a area that have been set aside to protect all the plants and animals in the sea and on the foreshore. If you do not look after the protected beach you will get a fine and you will break the law. Because if you do not look after protect the protected beach there will be more sea life and a good place to go to snorkel. At some unprotected beaches there is rope and plastic bottles in the sea and that will be disappointing. At the protected beach you will see no rubbish in the sea and it will be a safe place to go. Do you want all our fish to go away? Do reckon that we should have more Marine reserves in New Zealand? Well stop putting rubbish in all the Marine reserves. I will be so so pumped up of joy. At some protected beaches do you see rubbish. If you are going snorkeling in a Marine reserves you will be full of joy because you will see all of the kaimoana in the nice sea. In summary I will want more and more Marine reserves all around New Zealand.

Do you know how add and take away big numbers?

 W.A.L.T add and subtract big numbers.

Next time I want to be more confident when I speak. I found hard was speaking.  

My Goals

Today we have been making goals for out parent teacher interviews here is my one. What I found easy was getting the right background that lets others read my writing. What I found hard was doing all the work and writing all of my information. I hope you enjoy my goals.

What do you do with your rubbish.

Rubbish.  


I am learning how to make my long and short sentence make sense.

I think all waste should not be burnt or go to the landfill. No! I do not want it to be burnt or go to the landfill, what do you reckon? Do you agree or disagree? You do not need to take your rubbish to the dump. I think that you can still take your rubbish to the dump. But you can take some rubbish to the dump like stuff you can’t reuse.

I think people should reuse wood just in case something breaks that has wood. I think you can recycle parts of cars, paper, milk carton, glass, cans and tins. I think organic waste should be taken to the pigs, worm farms and compost. T I think hazardous is poisonous for the plants and bad for the environment. Did you know that biodegradable means stuff can rot down easily. To sum up I think people do not need to take all of their rubbish to the dump because you can make stuff with it.

Do you want a 600$ bill yes or no follow the Kawa of care.

Tikanag at Tautoro.

 WALT think about creative ways to promote and teach our values.
I was creative because my group used dress ups and made a movie.

Next time I need to learn how to edit my own movie.

My Place Value Strategy