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Thursday, March 30, 2017

What do you do with your rubbish.

Rubbish.  


I am learning how to make my long and short sentence make sense.


I think all waste should not be burnt or go to the landfill. No! I do not want it to be burnt or go to the landfill, what do you reckon? Do you agree or disagree? You do not need to take your rubbish to the dump. I think that you can still take your rubbish to the dump. But you can take some rubbish to the dump like stuff you can’t reuse.
I think people should reuse wood just in case something breaks that has wood. I think you can recycle parts of cars, paper, milk carton, glass, cans and tins. I think organic waste should be taken to the pigs, worm farms and compost. T I think hazardous is poisonous for the plants and bad for the environment. Did you know that biodegradable means stuff can rot down easily. To sum up I think people do not need to take all of their rubbish to the dump because you can make stuff with it.

Thursday, March 2, 2017

Tikanag at Tautoro.

 WALT think about creative ways to promote and teach our values.
I was creative because my group used dress ups and made a movie.




Next time I need to learn how to edit my own movie.

Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Motorbike day



What I can work on to improve my writing
Vocabulary
Use interesting words (adjectives, verbs, simile, onomatopoeia
Structure
Use variety of time words and end with my thoughts/feelings of the day.
Punctuation
To check my work to make my story way more better.


Whaea Lana’s comment
Good amount of detail. Some great writing you have set Tamaiti Look forward to teaching you and seeing your improvement this year. Another goal will by trying to add complexity.


                            In the holidays

In the holidays me my dad, my brothers went to go pick up a motorbike in Marsden point, It was a far as. When my dad, my brothers and I got there, the man was riding the motorbike. We all put the motorbike on the back of the my dads white Ford truck. When we were on the way to my uncle Boyboy's house it was far far away. It was very hot in the truck I had to wind down my window. It was so so hot. When we got to my uncle's house I said to my dad.
"I’m hungry."
My dad said.
"Go ask your uncle."
And I said.
"Ok then, don't get the motor bike off yet yup?"
So I went inside and ask my uncle if he could make a kai for us he said.
"Yup!"
So I went outside to go get the motorbike off the back off the truck. Billy took me for a ride on the motorbike. Billy and I went home for a swim. We stayed at home and waited for my dad and brother. When they got home my dad said. "Uncle said you missed out."
So Billy cooked some eggs for us. It was so so yummy. Shortly after Andy and Matt came down to my house on their motorbike. We all went for a ride except my brothers, just Billy and I, we went up the bush, it was freaky. We had seen a hawk, it was very freaky. When we got back from our ride on the motorbike, it was getting dark, so Andy and his dad went home. When they went home, I slipped quietly into my bed and then I went by my dad, he was outside he said.
"Go back inside now."
I went back on my bed and went to sleep. I felt so tired.