How do I sound?

Next time I will speak loudly and clearly. And change the sound of my voice.  And I am good at pausing at full stops.

The Big Crash.

WALT check that we have used correct structure for recount

To be successful we will:

• Say who, when, where and what at the beginning of our recount
• Use time words between events (Firstly, After that, next and finally
• End with a reflection (my thoughts about the event) 

Next time I will try to paragraph my story.

                                                                    Riding on the motorbikes with my brothers.  

Yay! Yay! The sun is out I went and asked my brother A-J wake up wake up it is Saturday morning and my brother said go away and I said, No! It’s time to wake up now. So I went to go ask my dad if me and my brother can ride the motorbikes he took a little long to answer me, Finally he answered me and said yes. So I went to go tell my brother get up we are allowed to ride on the motorbikes. I was excited to ride on the motorbikes. And he woke up straight away. So I said to him let's get a warm jacket on and pantes. First me and my brother went to the back shed where the motorbikes are. Then he said to me start your quad up and wait for me at the gate. So I went out to our gate and he could not start his motorbike so I pushed start him. Me and my brother went in the mud patch and it was funny because I got stuck in the mud and my brother was laughing at me so he went to go wake up my brother Hanita to tow me out of the mud. When he towed me out of the mud. After that when my brother towed me out my mum said to come home now. When me and my brothers got home to my mum and dad we all had a kai it was so so yummy. Me and my brothers and mum and dad had sausages and homemade burgers. Shortly after me and my brothers went back outside my brother Mana woke up and went to go wash his face so me and my brothers started the motorbike my brother Hanita went to the back shed to get his motorbike out to ride with me and my brother A-J. When my brother Hanita started his motorbike we went out to the road my brother A-J just got my front of my quad. My brother A-J put a little dent in the front of my quad. Some of his back bumper came off. Put I said to him it’s all right. When my brother hit me my brother billy woke up he said to us what happen and I said A-J hit the front of my quad. The sun was starting to go down my dad said to park the bikes up so me and my brothers went to go park the bikes up. My dad ask what happen to the front of your quad I said A-J hit the front of my quad my dad said hurry up it’s kai time I asked what is for dinner boilup. after dinner me and my brothers went for a shower. After my shower I felt nice and fresh. When my brothers finished their shower I asked them if they wanted to watch Moana. I fell to sleep in the room. It was a nice day with my brothers and mum and dad.